A new Holiday

A new Holiday:
You are in charge of inventing and introducing a new holiday world widely. What day and for what reason are you going to honor this day and how do you want people celebrate it?

As our cities have been becoming more multicultural regions, I see we need new opportunities to get more acquaintance with each other, I suppose to celebrate “nation-neighbor’s day” in order to solve any prejudgment or misunderstanding between groups of people.

Modern cities are gallery of cultures now; different people with different thoughts and values are coming together, closer than ever before. People are in hurry and hence they have no chance to get familiar with a strange new comer; as a result they try to repel strangers simply. This mechanism slim the chance down that people live in peaceful environment and raises racism. They need a chance to be acquainted.

Many people take apart in other neighbors celebrities to congratulate them. This is a good opportunity for them to show friendship and get more information about their cultures and customs. For example Many Muslims Celebrate Christmas with their Christian friends and in return many Christians congratulate them in their religious fests. However we need a special fest for celebrating our differences and varieties as the most beautiful part of our world. This will bring more friends together internationally.

In such a fest, call it Nation-Neighbor’s Day, people may host friend from other groups than they belong themselves and may serve their special dishes. They spend more time to talk about their passed times and their view of points about living close to others. This day would enhance our civilization, living different people respectfully close to each other.

Regards to my friends here

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Definitely good, in my opinion. Interesting subject and essay. Good job Sayid.

Mixmixi

Sayid, this essay shows an unbelievable improvement in every way.

What have you been reading since your last essay, every newspaper in the world? :-))

Kitos.

Really? :slight_smile:
so I’m supposed to go ahead, reading and reading good essays and Daily Telegraph:D

Thanks Dear Kitsodad
I’m wondering do you like it as is or you like some corrections?

Dear Mixmixi, I couldn’t hear your voice track

Hi Sayid,
I know you cannot hear my voice, I have the same problem too.It’s the same thing as I wrote.

As our cities have /been becoming/ BECOME/more multicultural regions, I see we need new opportunities to /get more acquaintance/BECOME MORE ACQUAINTED/ with each other, I suppose to celebrate “nation-neighbor’s day” in order to solve any prejudgEment or misunderstanding between groups of people.

Modern cities are A gallery of cultures now; different people with different thoughts and values are coming together, closer than ever before. People are in A hurry and hence they have no chance to get familiar with a strange new-comer.
As a result they try to repel strangers simply. This mechanism /slim/REDUCES the chance down that people live in peaceful environment and raises racism. They need a chance to beCOME acquainted.

Many people take apart in other neighbors celebrities to congratulate them. This is a good opportunity for them to show friendship and get more information about their cultures and customs.
For example, many Muslims celebrate Christmas with their Christian friends, and in return many Christians congratulate AND JOIN WITH them in their religious fests.
However we need a special feast for celebrating our differences and varieties as the most beautiful part of our world. This will bring more friends together internationally.

In such a feast, call it Nation-Neighbor’s Day, people may host friendS from other groups than they /belong themselves/THEY THEMSELVES BELONG TO/ and may serve their special dishes. They spend more time /to talk/TALKING about their passed times and their /view of points/POINTS OF VIEW/ about living close to others. This day would enhance our civilization, /living/ALLOWING/ different people TO LIVE IN HARMONY/respectfully close to each other.

Kitos.

thanks dear Kitsodad,
I’ll absorb them.

hello Sayid,
Nice essay.