A lot of money oy just enough for comfortable life?

topic: Many people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money, while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Analyze each viewpoint and take a stand. Give specific reasons for your position.

My essay.

Nowadays, world are becoming easier and easier than ever before. In the past, a lot of people have to truggle to survive, especially in developing countries. However, today people can easily find a job to work to earn money and live. Many people are satisfied with their salary and feel that they live comfortably, they do want to take effort to earn a lot of money. In contrast, some others do. Each way has good and bad points that need to be comsidered.
With the people who are satisfied with earning comfortable living, their live maybe comfortable but, in my opinion, quite boring. They are not able to contribte too much to community, do charity, and help other people. Probably, all they have to do is to find a good position in a company to work and live for their whole life. Yes, if their salary is high they can afford for almost whatever they want, they do have take too much effort to do new things. However, I think it is quite bored for one person to do the same kind of job through his or her life. There will be nearly no change to their job, they will work day by day and receive their salary at the end of each month.
On contrary, the people who want to earn a lot of money have to take a lot of effort to do so. If they can earn a lot of money, they can do whatever they want, for exmaple, they can take interesting travel a round the world. They can explore any culture, any reagion on the earth. Moreover, they will beable to contribute a lot to community, do charity and help other people. Maybe, their prestige will last forever. One good example is Bill Gate, Bill was the ricjest persin in the world for elevents years in a row. Now, he is still very rich. He has been contribute a lot to human community. For example, just a few days ago, when I was searching in inrernet, I bumped to a new that said Bill donate 10 billion dollar for his vaccine campain in African contries. He hope that his campain will save lives of poor children in these countries. So, because of his contribution, I believe that people around the world will remember him for ever.
In conclusion, maybe life of a person will be easy if they are satisfied with earing comfortable living, but it will be much more intesting to earn a large amount of money beacause very rich people can do great things for mankind. Thus, I believe that if a person has a any chance of earing large amount of money legally, he or she should try on his or her best to catch it.

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topic: Many people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money, while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Analyze each viewpoint and take a stand. Give specific reasons for your position.

My essay.

Nowadays, THE world IS becoming easier and easier than ever before. In the past, a lot of people HAD to Struggle to survive, especially in developing countries. However, today people can easily find a job to work to earn money and live. Many people are satisfied with their salary and feel that they live comfortably(.) They do want to Make THE effort to earn a lot of money. In contrast, some others do. Each way has good and bad points that need to be coNsidered.

With the people who are satisfied with earning A comfortable living, their LIFE maybe comfortable but, in my opinion, quite boring. They are not able to contribUte too much to THEIR community, do charitABLE WORK, and help other people. Probably, all they have to do is to find a good position in a company to work and live for their whole life. Yes, if their salary is high they can afford TO BUY almost whatever they want(.) They do NOT have Make too much effort to do new things. However, I think it is quite borING for one person to do the same kind of job through his or her life. There will be nearly no change to their job, they will work day by day and receive their salary at the end of each month.
On THE contrary, the people who want to earn a lot of money have to take a lot of effort to do so. If they can earn a lot of money, they can do whatever they want, for exAMple, they can take interesting travel TRIPS (around) the world. They can explore any culture, any region on the earth. Moreover, they will be able to contribute a lot to THEIR community, do charity WORK and help other people. Maybe, their prestige will last forever. One good example is Bill GateS(.) HE was the ricHest persOn in the world for eleven years in a row. Now, he is still very rich. He has been contributeD a lot to human community. For example, just a few days ago, when I was searching in INTERNET, I bumped INto a new POST that said Bill donateD 10 billion dollarS for his vaccine campaiGn in African coUntries. He hopeS that his campaiGn will save THE lives of poor children in these countries. So, because of his contribution, I believe that people around the world will remember him for ever.
In conclusion, maybe THE life of a person will be easy if they are satisfied with earNing A comfortable living, but it will be much more inteREsting to earn a large amount of money because very rich people can do great things for mankind. Thus, I believe that if a person has a any chance of earNing large amount of money legally, he or she should try on his or her best to catch it.
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