[size=150][color=red]A good sense of humor is one of the most important human qualities[/size]
There is no question that humor has a paramount importance in our life. Although some people believe that humor is not necessary sense in human character, I am sure that we can see a lot of benefits of having it. A sense of humor helps people to be happy forever, to influence others positively and to stay younger.
First of all, a person with a sense of humor can be happy in any time. This ability helps him to forget problems even in the most difficult situations. So, it contributes him to smile and to be patient which is the clue of surmounting problems.
Secondly, sense of humor aids people to influence others positively. In this case you can make more friends and acquaintances, because most people are likely to be around positive people in order to get positive energy in today’s world. So that’s sense of humor can gain us lots of new friends.
Finally, studies show that one of the most important indicator of staying younger is to have a sense of humor, because smiling and being able to enjoy everything prevent people to get older. According to the results of the study humorous people live longer and stay younger than those of negative ones.
Consequently, people are getting to be sad in these days due to problems, but the only way to get rid of these undesirable situations is having a sense of humor. It allows us to be able to rejoice in hard conditions, to be a good and positive example to others. It also contributes to a slower pace of getting older.
[color=red]Hi KITOSDAD, PLZZZZZZZZ check my essays, i had univ exams, so thats i couldnt write more essays, now i have 2 weeks, i ll take a TOEFL exam on february 7, plzzz check out my essay. tell me ur feed back.
Hi Kleopatra, I liked your essay but I think that it is short for a exam. It is only my opinion and I am sure that our good friend Kitos will check your essay as soon as he can.
Hi Kleopatra
I am not as good as Kitos but i am able to give you some suggestions.
First of all, you essay’s length is possibly acceptable but you had better make it longer around 300 words.
Secondly,I want to fix that people use their sense of humor not to forget but to experience the difficulties in the positive ways. You have ideas, but you accidentally forgot giving examples for your essay, i want to remind you that examples is the most important way to get readers similar to what you wrote and intended to express literately.
Let’s see how Kitos correct yours.
Thanks
There is no question that humor /has/PLAYS/ a paramount /PART/ROLE/importance/ in our /life/LIVES/.
Although some people believe that humor is not /AN ESSENTIAL/necessary/ sense in A humanS character, I am sure that we can /see/FIND/ a lot of benefits /of/IN/ having /it/ONE/.
A sense of humor helps people to be happy, and it also influenceS others IN A POSITIVE WAY, and HELPS THEM to stay younger.
First of all, a person with a sense of humor can be happy /in/AT any time. This ability helps him to forget problems even in the most difficult situations. So, it /contributes/HELPS him to smile and to be patient, which is the clue /of/IN/ surmounting problems.
Secondly, A sense of humor aids people /to influence/IN INFLUENCING/ others positively. You can make more friends and acquaintances, because most people /are likely/PREFER/ to be around positive people in order to get positive energy in today’s world. So, HAVING A sense of humor can /gain/ATTRACT/ lots of new friends.
Finally, studies show that one of the most important indicatorS /of/IN/ staying younger is to have a sense of humor, because smiling and being able to enjoy everything preventS people to /getTING/BECOMING/older.
According to the results of A RECENT study, humorous people live longer and stay younger than those /of negative ones/WITH A NEGATIVE OUTLOOK/.
Consequently, people are /getting to be/BECOMING sad these days due to problems, but the only way to get rid of these undesirable situations is /IN/BY/having a sense of humor. It allows us to be able to /rejoice in/RISE ABOVE/ hard conditions, AND to be a good and positive example to others. It also contributes /to a slower pace of/ IN RETARDING THE ONSET OF getting older.
Good morning AYNUR. In spite of my corrections and additions, I found your essay quite interesting. You have a good sense of sentence structure, and your vocabulary is more than adequate. 7/10
i appreciate your comments. Yes, i know this essay is short, because i have not been practicing writing for a month,
because i had difficult exams at university. Now i finished them and i am going to do my utmost in order to achieve the
best point from the Toefl test. Thanks your comments Bxnl and Lighgun.
So, how r u Kitosdad?, i hope u r fine. Kitosdad i have a question to you. can not i say ----“A sense of humor aids people /to influence/IN INFLUENCING/ others positively”
— to influence instead of " in influencing " in this correction by you. Is my choice is wrong ?
can not i say ----“A sense of humor aids people /to influence/IN INFLUENCING/ others positively”
— to influence instead of " in influencing " in this correction by you. Is my choice is wrong ?
Your wording was acceptable.
I am not correcting your words Kleo, simply offering an alternative word that you might prefer, or reject.
Please do refrain from using SMS wording. We do not want other readers to be encouraged into the same habit. They come here to learn English, not to learn how to use the SMS service. Thanks.
Sorry Kitosdad, did i said something wrong? what do you mean by stating “SMS service.”
i did not want to disrespect anyone, but i am sure i have not said any irrelevant opinions. In fact i have not intend to say any irrelevant things.
I really did not know why you blamed me. I respect everyone and thanked everyone. is it a bad thing?
plz if i have a fault tell it to me clearly, i would definitely try to eliminate them.
Anyway ,if i had some faults i am sorry. Although i do not know what is the cause of it. i know here is a site for learning,
i also use it and respect everyone , every learner and checker.
So, how r u Kitosdad?, i hope u r fine. Kitosdad i have a question to you. can not i say ----“A sense of humor aids people /to influence/IN INFLUENCING/ others positively”
Hi Kleo. You didn’t insult anyone at all. I was referring to your using the above form of writing.
you know why i asked? because i did not use this site during january due to my univ exams, and it was the first time that i entered yesterday.
Perhaps you have forgotten, but i used this site in december more, and you also helped me. Thats why after a months i just asked you this question.
I even now did not understand what was my fault. is it wrong to ask about one’s mood ,if you respect him? Furthermore, i put a question mark after the sentence, and copied the sentence due to show my question or what i want to say.
Ok. If it is banned to ask someone about his mood because of respect in this site i will never use it in this site again.
Thanks. I’m happy that we cleared that problem up so quickly.
If you were to use these same abbreviations on some other threads I’m sure that someone would quickly correct you there too.
Now that we have a connection with Facebook I will be interested to see how quickly the site goes downhill. (This is only my opinion, and I hope to be proven very wrong.)
