Hello everybody! I am preparing for my up-coming IELTS exam in March this year. Usually, people have a tendency to write a body paragraph with 2 ideas, however, I really want to know how to write a paragraph with only 1 idea. Because sometimes it is quite hard for me to come up with 2 relevant ideas and I think that spending 1 paragraph for 1 idea would help me to analyse the idea deeply. Please give me some recommendation about writing a paragraph with only 1 idea and how to analyse the idea fully (I mean in which aspects that I should analyse about the idea,…).
Thank you so so much <3
Topic: Although many people value their public parks, this space could be better used for other purposes such as residential areas for the ever growing population or to develop business and boost economies.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?
That whether public parks should be utilized for other purposes or not is a controversial topic of today’s world. While many people believe that these places should be reconstructed to sever the purposes of settling down or running businesses, I am of the opinion that people should maintain public parks because of its potential benefits.
It is true that a part of the society agrees to replace public parks with constructions which could be used for other activities. To be more specific, the deconstruction of public parks could address the problem of housing shortage in many metropolises. In Hanoi, for example, authorities replaced five parks in order to build some novel apartments for fifteen thousand immigrants who are on the verge of becoming homeless. From the perspective of resettled people, replacing these public areas with apartments could help them make a fresh start without worrying about housing. From the perspective of the government, ruling parties could save a huge amount of money which used to be paid for the subsidy for homeless people.
However, I am convinced that public parks should be maintained because of its significant advantages. First, these places could help people to improve their health. As parks have lots of paths and are usually quiet, people could do some exercises such as running, biking in there. Second, parks are a factor that could help people fight climate change. Because maintaining public parks is an effective measure to preserve a number of trees planted there, and these plants would be able to reduce the amount trapping gases which are discharged from vehicles or factories. As a result, the problem of global warming would be alleviated.
To conclude, it is true that public parks are believed to be replaced with many constructions to serve other purposes such as residing or developing businesses. However, I am contented that these public places should be maintained because of its benefits included improving people’s health and helping people to fight climate change.