Hi Luschen,
If you have time can you check out my independent and integrated essays? This will be my last integrated essay on this forum and I would like to know if it’s worth a 5/5 and if there are any other areas I can improve on.
Also, can you recommend anything that will increase my score on the speaking section?
Here are the links for the essays:
Hi, I would be really thankful if someone could rate my integrated essay.
Reading passage:
Soon technology will provide smart cars: cars that virtually drive themselves. A computer in the car determines the speed and route to the desired destination. The computer is in continuous contact with a global positioning system and other technologies that will provide extremely accurate information about the location of the car, other cars on the road, congestion, accidents, and so forth. The human dr…
Hi I would be really thankful if someone could rate this essay.
Q: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People learn things better from those at their own level-such as fellow students or co-workers-than from those at a higher level, such as teachers or supervisors.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The question of whether people learn better from those at their own level rather than from those at a higher level has been quite controversial. Recently…
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