Please review my essay .students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends

Because of the long time children spend in school, some believe that students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends. I disagree that students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends. I hold this opinion for two reasons, which I will explore in this essay.

First, students spent most of their time with their friends and not with their teachers. In fact, students spent their time with teachers only in school, but with their friends they can spend a lot of time outside and inside school. In addition, students can meet their friends at home and spend their time playing games, going on trips, eating together and doing other activities. In contrast. Students cannot stay with their teachers for a long time, not only because there is limited time to see each other at school, but also because teachers have teaching responsibilities that they cannot break with their students. For example, my brother spends most of his time with his friends at the university, at home, and other places. Consequently, he is heavily influenced by them in all aspects of his life because he spends so much time with them.

Second, I have to admit that you can get a lot of valuable knowledge just from the classroom. But when you talk to teachers about all the subjects you want, you feel uncomfortable talking. In addition, you can ask him only in the academic field, while with friends you can talk about anything that concerns you, even if they do not have enough information.Talking with friends is convenient, you can talk without exclusive or careful words. Therefore, all these conversation protocols lead students to avoid talking to their teachers and prefer to talk to their friends, which has a great effect. For example, when I was in high school, I talked to my friends about everything because it is so easy to talk to them, free from all formalities.

In conclusion, I believe that children have more contact with their friends than with teachers. This is because they spend more time with their friends and they talk to them in a pleasant way.

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