Personal Profile (Unit 3)

[Viet]

hello everyone,
I am Viet.
I am from Vietnam.
I am 24 years old.
I am tall.
I am not married.
I am a math teacher.
I am interested in studying math.
I want to be a mathematician.

[Naser]

hi sir
i am naser
i am engineering bts
i am from Egypt
i am from 20 years old
i am tall
i am not married
i am very intersted by MCSE,CCNA
I AM WORKING IN VODAFONE

[Torsten]

@Marmaritaa

Hello
I’m Mai
I’m 21
I’m from Egypt
I’m have a degree of Business Administration
I’m Not tall , not short
i’m single
I’m interested in learning languages

Dear Mai,

Thanks a lot for joining our forum and submitting your personal profile. It looks very good so keep up the great work! Please remember that every sentence ends with a full stop (.) Here are some more suggestions:

@Marmaritaa

I’m have a degree of Business Administration

I have a degree in business administration.

@Marmaritaa

I’m Not tall , not short

I’m neither tall nor short.

@Marmaritaa

i’m single

I’m single.

@Marmaritaa

I’m interested in learning languages

That’s excellent :-)!

Best regards,
Torsten[YSaerTTEW443543]

TOEIC listening, photographs: A rural scene[YSaerTTEW443543]

[Torsten]

@Louis

Hello
I’m Louis
I’m from Sudan
I’m 29 years old
I’m Mechanical Engineer
I’m 180cm tall
I;m interested in learing english language on line, and I would like to inform you that I received all the lessions from one to three and they were understod.in test one I got 7 scors and the same scors also in test two.
thank you very much for your help.

Dear Louis,

Thanks a lot for joining our forum and welcome to engllish-test.net! I see that you have posted your personal profile which looks great. There are just a few things I’d like to point out. Most importantly: Please remember to end every sentence with a full stop (.) Here are some more suggestions:

@Louis

I’m Mechanical Engineer

I’m a mechanical engineer.

@Louis

I;m interested in learing english language on line, and I would like to inform you that I received all the lessions from one to three and they were understod.in test one I got 7 scors and the same scors also in test two.

I’m interested in learning English online and I would like to let you know that I understood all the three lessons I received from you. In both tests I got 7 correct answers.

That’s great news, Louis. I look forward to your next forum posts.

Best regards,
Torsten[YSaerTTEW443543]

TOEIC listening, photographs: The herdsman[YSaerTTEW443543]

[Torsten]

@Woranuch

Hi,

My name is Woranuch.
I’m 30 years old.
I’m working with NGO organization.
I’m Thai.
I’m single.
I’m interested in human resource management.

Good to share with you.

Bye

Dear Woranuch,

Thank you for joining our forum and submitting your personal profile which looks great. There’s only one minor little thing I’d like to point out:

@Woranuch

I’m working with NGO organization.

I work for an NGO organization. If you work for the organization on a regular basis, it’s better to use the simple present. If it’s a temporary job, you can use the present progressive as you did in your sentence.

Please let me know what you think.
Best regards,
Torsten[YSaerTTEW443543]

TOEIC listening, photographs: Two types of transportation[YSaerTTEW443543]

[Torsten]

@1msh23

Dear sir

How are you?

I am mohammed Musthafa
I am 26 years old
I am from Kerala, India
I am studying for law
I have completed my graduation in philosophy
I am not married
I like stud languages, especially for english language because their world wide recognition

I like English Language because of their rich heritage
I like English Language because I can communicate to anyone in this world
I like English Language because english speaking people considered as a civilized in society in third world countries.

Finally, I would remain thankful to you, if you will make corretion in my writing.

Best wishes for all

Bye…Bye…
Musthafa

Dear Musthafa,

Many thanks for your joining our forum and posting your personal profile. You did a very good job and I have only a few suggestions: Please don’t forget to put a full stop (.) at the end of each sentence. Also, you might consider using a spell checker. Here are some more ideas:

@1msh23

I am mohammed Musthafa

I’m Mohammed Musthafa.

@1msh23

I am studying for law

I’m a law student.

@1msh23

I have completed my graduation in philosophy

I have a degree in philosophy.

@1msh23

I like stud languages, especially for english language because their world wide recognition

I like studying languages, especially English because it is recognized around the world.

@1msh23

I like English Language because of their rich heritage

I like the English language because of its interesting history.

@1msh23

I like English Language because I can communicate to anyone in this world

I like the English language because I can use it communicate with people from around the world.

@1msh23

I like English Language because english speaking people considered as a civilized in society in third world countries.

I like the English language because in third world countries English speaking people are considered to be civilized.

Let me know what you think.
Best regards,
Torsten[YSaerTTEW443543]

TOEIC listening, photographs: A building site[YSaerTTEW443543]

[Nehal]

Hi

My name is Neha
I’m fom INDIA
I’m 22yrs old
Iam a dentist
Iam single
Iam interested in learning English online n woulld like to let u know that i have gone through all the lessons.
thanking you for your guidance.

[Torsten]

Dear Neha,

Thanks a lot for joining our forum and posting your personal profile. It looks very good so keep up the great work! Please remember to end every sentence with a full stop (.)

Here are some more suggestions:

@Nehal

I’m fom INDIA

I’m from India.

@Nehal

I’m 22yrs old

I’m 22 years old.

@Nehal

Iam a dentist

I’m a dentist.

@Nehal

Iam single

I’m single.

@Nehal

Iam interested in learning English online n woulld like to let u know that i have gone through all the lessons.

I’m interested in learning English online and would like to let you know that I have gone through all the lessons.

Please let me know what you think.
Best regards,
Torsten[YSaerTTEW443543]

TOEIC listening, photographs: Building in progress[YSaerTTEW443543]

[Farrukh_Azeem]

hlo… i m farrukh 4m pakistan…

i m so jolly and loving person…

my hobbies are hanging out, reading books and swimming…

[Nehal]

thank you for guidance.

[Adryana]

Hello. I’m Adriana. I’m from Malaysia. I’m going to be unattached soon and hope to make new friends. I work for a multi-national company as an Executive Secretary and Administrator. I am currently attending Mandarin classes. I’m also interested to learn and improve my English here.

[Torsten]

@ENGLISH4ME

Hello Torsten,

I’ve been reading all of the posts added by the other users and I don’t know if what I’m about to write goes against the rules of this forum, but the answer for your question about what Shade means by “HIGHEST TECHNOLOGY”, is that “He is interested in CUTTING-EDGE TECHNOLOGY”.

Hope this helps.

Regards,
ENGLISH4ME

Hello ENGLISH4ME,

Thank you very much for your great support! It’s so good to hear you have read all the posts in this thread and I’m glad you’ve pointed out that Shade wanted to say “cutting-edge technology”. This makes perfect sense. So, yes this is exactly what the forum is all about – sharing ideas and learning from each other.

I look forward forward to your next posts.
Regards,
Torsten[YSaerTTEW443543]

TOEIC listening, photographs: On the farm[YSaerTTEW443543]

[Torsten]

@vanvuong

hi!
I’m Van.
I’m from Vietnam.
I’m 21 years old.
I’m learning graphic design.I like it and i like learning English language,too.I hope i’ll speak and listen english fluently.
I’m 170cm tall
I’m not married

Hello Van,

Many thanks for joining our forum and posting your personal profile. You did a great job and I’d only like to point out some minor things:

@vanvuong

I’m learning graphic design.I like it and i like learning English language,too.I hope i’ll speak and listen english fluently.

I study graphic design and I like learning English, too. I hope I’ll soon be able to speak English fluently. I also want to improve my listening skills.

Let me know what you think.
Best regards,
Torsten[YSaerTTEW443543]

TOEIC listening, photographs: The receptionist[YSaerTTEW443543]

[Torsten]

@Clo

Hello to everybody,
I’m Clo.
I’m from Italy and I’ve lived in Milan area since I was born.
I’m 56 years old.
I’m married, I haven’t children but I have a step-son, now he’s 24 years old and I’ve lived with him for 9 years.
I work as an employee in a hospital.
I like travelling very much.
I’d like to improve my English. My biggest problems are: 1-speaking, 2-listening, 3-writing!

Thanks to english-test team for having sent me a new password in few minutes!
Bye

Hello Clo,

It’s great to see you have managed to register on the forum. Your personal profile looks very interesting I look forward to your next forum posts. By the way, your English is pretty good and I’m sure you will enjoy our course.

Speak to you soon,
Torsten[YSaerTTEW443543]

TOEIC listening, photographs: Just checking[YSaerTTEW443543]

[Torsten]

@kimnganvgs

Hi,
I’m Kim Ngan. I come from Viet Nam
I am 24 years old.
I am a legal consultant at the securities company.
I’m single. Sometimes i feel bored and alone abit.
I want to make friends with everyone here.

Dear Kim Ngan,

How are you today? I hope you are not feeling bored now ;-). Thanks a lot for joining our forum and posting your personal profile. You made almost no mistakes so there are only a few things I’d like to point out:

@kimnganvgs

I am a legal consultant at the securities company.

I am a legal consultant at a stock trading company.

@kimnganvgs

Sometimes i feel bored and alone abit.

Sometimes I feel a bit bored and alone.

If you like, you can tell me more about your job as a legal consultant. How many hours do you work each day?

Talk to you soon,
Torsten[YSaerTTEW443543]

TOEIC listening, photographs: The main pipe line[YSaerTTEW443543]

[Torsten]

@hnhung

Hi Torsten,
I’m Hung (My English name is Handy Man)
I live in the South of Vietnam
I’m married and have 2 daughter
I’m 40 years old and working for insurance corporation
I’m working as an IT manager, my habit is learning English and try to improve my English.
I like playing football and play 2 or 3 times a week.
Anyway, thanks for your English support.
Bye

Hi Hung-Handy Man,

It’s great to see you have joined our forum. Many thanks for that! Your English is already very good and there are only a few things I’d like to point out:

@hnhung

I’m married and have 2 daughter

I’m married and have two daugthers.

@hnhung

I’m 40 years old and working for insurance corporation

I’m 40 years old and work for an insurance company.

@hnhung

I’m working as an IT manager, my habit is learning English and try to improve my English.

I work as an IT manager and my hobby is learning English and improving my language skills.

Hope this helps. If you like, you can tell me more about your work as an IT manager. What exactly do you do?

Talk to you soon,
Torsten[YSaerTTEW443543]

TOEIC listening, photographs: Old style transport[YSaerTTEW443543]

[Torsten]

@NguyenDungTN

Hey everyone!

I’m Manh Dung Nguyen
I’m 17 years old.
I’m from Hanoi, Vietnam.
I’m single!
I’m studying at HUS High School for gifted students.
I’m interested in Mathematics!
Nice to meet you!

Dear Manh Dung Nguyen,

How are you today? Thanks a lot for joining our forum and posting your personal profile which looks great. Please tell us more about HUS. When did you join it and what do you like most about it? Also, where and how did you learn English?

Talk to you soon,
Torsten[YSaerTTEW443543]

TOEIC listening, photographs: Loading a barge[YSaerTTEW443543]

[Torsten]

@hothu

Hello sir,
I’m Ho. I’m form Vietnam, so my nationality is Vietnamese.
I want to improve my English because it is useful for my job.
However, I find it difficult to learn listening and speaking which I need to improve most. I thank you a lot for what you sent me through the email, but I couldn’t find the exercises as you wrote. Please help me with them.
Thank you so much.

Dear Ho,

Many thanks for your message. I’m glad you like our email English course. As for the exercises, you can start by reading and listening to this text.

Let me know what you think.
Regards,
Torsten[YSaerTTEW443543]

TOEIC listening, photographs: Taking a picture[YSaerTTEW443543]

[Torsten]

@gelink

Hello,

My name is Vu Viet Cuong

I’m 21 years old. I’m from Vietnam.

I’m student studying managerment and planning project

I’m interested in reading comic and learning English.
I like comic because it is very interesting. And i have learnt something from it.
Thank you.

Dear Vu Viet Cuong,

Many thanks for posting your personal profile. I hope it’ll be OK for you if I make some suggestions:

@gelink

I’m student studying managerment and planning project

I study business management.

@gelink

I’m interested in reading comic and learning English.

I’m interested in reading comics and learning English.

@gelink

I like comic because it is very interesting. And i have learnt something from it.

I like comics because they are very interesting and I have learnt something from them.

So what is your favourite comic book?

Talk to you soon,
Torsten[YSaerTTEW443543]

TOEIC listening, photographs: City Dwellings[YSaerTTEW443543]

[Rosee487]

I’m Rania tlal.
I’m 26.
I’m from egypt.
I’m 160cm tall.
I’m not married .
I’m intresting in sports and learning english.
please correct my mistakes
thank you