No field of study can enhance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge

Topic: no field of study can enhance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge & experience to that field of study.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Humans have constantly evolved since time immemorial, both physically and intellectually. Their knowledge has diversified and branched into a multitude of study fields. While each field is different from one another in both concentration and approach, there is an opinion that no field of study can remarkably advance without the inclusion of outsider contribution. I partially concur with such an opinion. While the application of science to other fields is observable, science has receive marginal external contribution.

In the modern world, it is blatant that scientific inventions are related to all spheres of life. Firstly, the rise of computers has digitalized every morsel of information, making the operation of labor tasks less demanding and more efficacious. For example, accountancy have transformed from paper and mechanical calculators to automatic softwares processing immeasurable information in a short period of time. Moreover, scientific discoveries become the inspiration or even an integral part of several forms of art. Astronomical observations have become the main theme of several masterworks such as the Roden Crater. Music sheets operate based on mathematic calculations. Were it not for the intervention of science, art would become monotonous, unimaginative and shortsighted.

Contrariwise, science advance predominantly by itself and do not rest on any external field. Outsiders may freely talk about subjects of science, but since they do not delve into the discipline, nonspecialist discussions lack any outcome that can redound to the progress of science. Moreover, science is intrinsically prohibitive. The audience of scientific meetings are scientists themselves, since the specialization required makes it impossible for laymen to comprehend. Last but not least, unlike art which is open to numerous interpretations and evaluation, science is absolute, consisting of only the right and the wrong, the theories and the experimentation. Hence applying outsider perception into scientific works would be faulty and even detrimental.

All in all, while outsider knowledge can greatly benefit several areas of study, it bears no relation to the field of science. Should professionals in spheres like art, business, etc. they should synergize with external knowledge to help expand the view on their subject and reap desirable results.

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Hi, who have you written your essay for and what kind of response do you expect? How can your readers benefit from your essay? Why should any read what you write?

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please help me to correct any vocabulary and sentence in my essay.

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I don’t understand the sentence above. Can you please explain what you want to say?

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I mentioned a writing task at top of the essay," no field of study can enhance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge & experience to that field of study." If you think any sentence and vocabulary are not suitable, you can highlight and help me correct them. Thanks

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Software is uncountable you so you can say ‘software applications’.

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is that all from the writing ?

I’m afraid we’re going round in circles here. You still haven’t answered by questions. Why would I spend my time on correcting your essay when I’m the only person reading it?

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Outsiders can bring their knowledge only to help some extent, we cannot force the professionals to bring out their knowledge to shape the entire society. Of course, I have improved my knowledge only after joining the form only, especially Sir Torston, Sir Alan Sir have tuned myself to extract my knowledge in English to some extent. So we can learn from knowledged people, but we cannot expect them to develop their skill on behalf of whole society.

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I know that you are so busy that You hardly have a minute to read my writing. I would like to know what I am writing is, and how exactly I use English vocabulary. If you have time, please pick up the incorrect words from my writing. Thank you very much for that.

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Hi Sun Rise, I think it’s the other way around. You don’t seem to have enough time to read and respond to the questions and comments by other forum members and myself. Instead, you focus only on your own person which means you are no longer using effective learning methods. The truth is that nobody really needs the type of essay you are trying so diligently to compose so what is the point in me ‘correcting your vocabulary’? What exactly are you trying to accomplish with the whole endeavor?

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" What exactly are you trying to accomplish with the whole endeavor?" I would like to know how exactly I am using the vocabularies. if bother you,please ignore my message. Thank y

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The noun ‘vocabulary’ usually doesn’t have a plural form. We have discussed this before here: The plural form of vocabulary

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