Your perseverance, enduring and overcoming all the difficulties

It is the embodiment of both your earnest faith desiring a temple in your country and your perseverance, enduring and overcoming all the difficulties along the way.

Is the part in bold correct?

Thanks.

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Yes, it sounds correct to me.

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Just one point - the two participles (enduring and overcoming) seem to have lost connection with the subject. I suggest you rephrase as -

…your perseverance in enduring and overcoming …

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