It is the embodiment of both your earnest faith desiring a temple in your country and your perseverance, enduring and overcoming all the difficulties along the way.
Is the part in bold correct?
Thanks.
It is the embodiment of both your earnest faith desiring a temple in your country and your perseverance, enduring and overcoming all the difficulties along the way.
Is the part in bold correct?
Thanks.
Yes, it sounds correct to me.
Just one point - the two participles (enduring and overcoming) seem to have lost connection with the subject. I suggest you rephrase as -
…your perseverance in enduring and overcoming …