Young people should try different job before they decide which job or career they

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Hi,kitos. Hope for your comment forever~~O(∩_∩)O~
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Jobs play a significant role in our whole life, it means a thing that we will devote ourselves to in a long term. Therefore, I believe that trying different jobs before pursuing a long-term career is beneficial and indispensable to people’s lifetime careers. There are three reasons which will strengthen my point of view.

First of all, through working in diverse areas, we can find our real interests that w may be ignored, before we graduated from universities. Nothing great can be achieved without enthusiasm. When we first come into the community, we have no idea about that which job is the most favorable one for us and what type of career we want to pursue in our lifetime. For example, Andy Liu----the famous actor and singer in Asia, have had several jobs such as a barber, a waiter in restaurant, and a food delivery guy. When he finally had access to actor, he was amazed to find that he was born to be a performer.

Furthermore, for young people, they can acquire much knowledge and many essential skills by changing different kinds of jobs. On one hand, learning something useful is important for the youth. Mistakes, sometimes, which are made during our working time, are the only path to success----at least we know what is wrong and how can we avoid making the same mistakes at next time. On the other hand, dealing with different people in different jobs teaches us how to get along well with our colleagues, how to show our talent in an appropriate way, and how to please our bosses, etc. All of these skills are necessary for our future success.

In addition, doing several jobs helps young people see things from different perspective. By changing our job, we gain valuable experience from it and make friends with people from different races and backgrounds. As a result, we become more mature and tolerable, which contributes to giving a good first impression to people around us and clearing our direction of lives.

In a nutshell, before finding the jobs that are exactly suitable for us, we’d better try more different jobs to find our real interests, to learn more and to become more mature

TOEFL listening discussions: Why did the young woman sit in the rear seat of the car?

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Hi,kitos. Hope for your comment forever~~O(∩_∩)O~
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Jobs play a significant role in our whole life(.) It means a thing that we will devote ourselves to FOR THE long term. Therefore, I believe that trying different jobs before pursuing a long-term career is beneficial and indispensable to people’s lifetime careers. There are three reasons which will strengthen my point of view.

First of all, through working in diverse areas, we can find our real interests that wE may OTHERWISE HAVE ignored before we graduated from universities. Nothing great can be achieved without enthusiasm. When we first come into the community, we have no idea about that which job is the most favoUrable one for us and what type of career we want to pursue in our lifetime. For example, Andy Liu----the famous actor and singer in Asia, have had several jobs(,) such as a barber, a waiter in A restaurant, and a food delivery guy. When he finally had access to BECOMING AN actor, he was amazed to find that he was born to be a performer.

Furthermore, for young people, they can acquire much knowledge and many essential skills by changing different kinds of jobs. On one hand, learning something useful is important for the youth. Mistakes, sometimes which are sometimes made during our working time, are the only path to success----at least we know what is wrong and how can we can avoid making the same mistakes at next time. On the other hand, dealing with different people in different jobs teaches us how to get along well with our colleagues, how to show our talent in an appropriate way, and how to please our bosses, etc. All of these skills are necessary for our future success.

In addition, doing several jobs helps young people see things from different perspectiveS. By changing our job, we gain valuable experience from it (,) and WE make friends with people from different races and backgrounds. As a result, we become more mature and tolerable, which contributes to giving a good first impression to people around us and clearing our direction of lives IN LIFE.

In a nutshell, before finding the jobs that are exactly suitable for us, we’d better try more different jobs to find our real interests, to learn more(,) and to become more mature
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Now you are doing better work Muyuyudhl. one is better organised, and very understandable by the reader.

Kitos. 8.5/10