would you please check the text below for any mistakes and correct it?

This is {here comes the name}, 27 years old, single, military service done, Holding B.Sc. degree in mechanical engineering ,very interested in working as an English translator, having 3 years experience in teaching and translating (English to Farsi and reverse) in different fields ( human sciences, technical and engineering sciences and etc ) and degrees ( B.Sc., M.A. and etc), having worked with computer softwares such as Microsoft Office , Autocad, Solidworks, LSdyna, ANSYS and CATIA. Able to work full-time and part-time with desired pay of at least {here comes the number}per month.

Thank you in advance.

This is {here comes the name}, 27 years old, single, ex-serviceman, holding a B.Sc. degree in Mechanical Engineering, very interested in working as an English translator, with three years of experience in teaching and translating (English into Farsi and vice versa) in different fields (human, technical and engineering sciences), having worked on software such as Microsoft Office, Autocad, Solidworks, LSdyna, ANSYS and CATIA and being able to work full-time or part-time with a pay of at least {here comes the amount} per month.

(The sentence is so lengthy that it would not be appropriate for a resume)

It would also not be appropriate to begin it with ‘This is’.
Pleasde don’t send duplicate posts in two different threads, Dodgewiper!