Your smile.
It’s something worth the while.
It’s something I will miss.
Something I wish to see.
We still talk.
And it’s quite fun.
But I miss looking into your eyes.
And laughing all the time.
Nothing is the same.
When you are away.
I think it’s safe to say.
I’ve missed you more and more each day.
I suspect that in “it’s pretty fun” you may be trying to use “pretty” to mean “quite” or “considerably”. This does not work, because “fun” cannot be a predicate adjective.
Otherwise, all the English looks correct to me.
Dozy,
Would it be OK to say “And it’s great fun”?
Thank you
Yes, that’s OK.
Thank you.
Ok. Thank you.