What are some of the qualities of a good parent?

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What are some of the qualities of a good parent? Use specific details and examples to explain your answer.

From my point of view, bringing up our children is the most responsible work during whole life. None of other people has the same or similar influence on them as their parents. That is why parents should be like a model of love to other people and desire to success.

First and foremost, parents should surround their children with love. If children see that everyone in their family cares for each other, and the father has a lot of respect to the mother, they will implicitly perceive these as usual things, not unique. Furthermore, kind and harmless personalities will grow up. On the other hand, consider a child who was born in a severe family, where everyone thought only about himself and did not expose any feelings. This child will be selfish and strict to other, and it will be difficult for him to build some relations with people or find a helpmate in the future.

Moreover, it is not less important to be successful so as to rear a strong individual. In today’s competitive world people should have certain characteristics in order to succeed. From my own perspective, successful people should not be unfeeling, severe and egoistic, but they should have a deep desire and willingness to achieve their goals. Definitely, these qualities can be absorbed by children from their parents. According to my own experience, my mother has always been an example for me. I can remember since my childhood how she, a teacher of world literature, devotes herself to her job. She did everything to show herself as a bright specialist not only among students, but also among all teachers in this subject. For example, for raising her qualification she gave open lessons for teachers from the whole city, published articles in specialized magazines, helped students to take part in different competitions, and she even familiarized with a computer that is very difficult for people at her age. Consequently, I cannot do something by halves; if I encounter some task, I do my best to accomplish it perfectly.

To sum up, parents are the most important people in children’s lives, because they better than someone else can exemplify the way how to exist in the world. As for me, parents should display their love and longing for success in order to grow nice and successful personalities.

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Hello Kitos
Thanks a lot for checking my essay.

What are some of the qualities of a good parent? Use specific details and examples to explain your answer.

From my point of view, bringing up our children is the most responsible work during OUR whole life. None of THE other people HAVE the same or similar influence on them as their parents. That is why parents should be like a model of love to other people and A desire to succEED IN THEIR PARENTAGE.

First and foremost, parents should surround their children with love. If children see that everyone in their family cares for each other, and the father has a lot of respect to the mother, they will implicitly perceive these as usual things, not SOMETHING unique. Furthermore, kind and harmless personalities will grow up. On the other hand, consider a child who was born in a /severe/SELFISH family, where everyone thought only about himself and did not expose any feelings. This child will be selfish and strict to otherS, and it will be difficult for him to build some relations with people, or find a helpmate in the future.

Moreover, it is not less important to be successful so as to rear a strong individual. In today’s competitive world people should have certain characteristics in order to succeed. From my own perspective, successful people should not be unfeeling, severe and egoistic, but they should have a deep desire and willingness to achieve their goals. Definitely, these qualities can be absorbed by children from their parents. According to my own experience, my mother has always been an example for me. I can remember since my childhood how she, a teacher of world literature, devoteD herself to her job. She did everything to show herself as a bright specialist, not only among students, but also among all teachers in this subject. For example, for raising her qualification she gave open lessons for teachers from the whole city, published articles in specialized magazines, helped students to take part in different competitions, and she even familiarized HERSELF with a computer(.) That is A very difficult TASK for people OF her age. Consequently, I cannot do something by halves; if I encounter some task, I do my best to accomplish it perfectly.

To sum up, parents are the most important people in children’s lives, because they ARE better than someone else can ANYONE ELSE IN exemplifyING the way how to exist in the world. As for me, parents should display their love and longing for success in order THAT THEIR CHILDREN WILL grow INTO nice and successful personalities.
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A very heart-warming essay Irchuk. Well done.

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