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TOEFL writing, task, independent essay.
Write about the following topic:
Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both this views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
While any of this points could be supported by sound arguments and relevant examples, I believe that visitors to foreign countries should learn about the culture of a foreign country and its language. On the other hand they should not lose their origin identity. I would like to illustrate my reasons as follows.
First, visitors to other countries should learn the culture and language of a foreign country. Before going somewhere it is better to know what local traditions of a definite country are. This will make possible the ease of communication and would definitely ignite a sense of respect to someone in a foreign country. In this way, one may prevent himself from getting into a situation of cultural misunderstanding. For instance, person from China traveling to Spain would better learn Spanish and a few most famous customs of that country.
Secondly, aliens should not lose their original identity. No country in the world have the right to forbid or to block existence of any other cultures, but have a chance to support diversity of worlds cultures. As far as I am concerned, if migrants or temporary visitors come to another country they should be provided with the opportunities to meet people from the country of their origin. Definite types of communities should be developed. So that people would feel comfortable while they are in a foreign country. For example, there many nations live in Russia, and in different corners of my country there so called diasporas of Chechens, Uzbeks, Adygeyans, and other ethnics. It helps them a lot to diffuse smoothly into a new foreign realm and to identify themselves as a different culture. I think it’s very important.
Finally, visitors should follow local customs and by whole their attitude should exhibit their respect to people living in a given country. From my own experience, I can tell that ignorance of local language and customs may lead to a big problems, since it is a disrespect to another culture. I used to live in South Osetia when I was a child. I am Russian and people living there are osetians. They have a different language, customs and origins. They showed a high veneration to us, buy studying our literature, customs, language. But on the other hand they made incumbent upon us to study their language at school. I did studied osetian language at school. It helped me a lot to better understand indigenous people of that region. And I have not felt myself as an alien there, but as a brother who can be supported any time.
All things considered, people planning to visit or to live in a foreign country must familiarize themselves with the culture of that country. But this does not mean that they should give up the original traits of their home country. Different cultures should respect other cultures, in order to provide a piece on our planet. And providing that people learn foreign languages and customs, I am sure our world will never come to the verge of war.
With regards,
Valery Shepenkov
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