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Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same
amount of money to their students’ sports activities as they give to their university libraries. Use
specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
There has been a heated debate concerning that the same amount of money ought to be given to students’ sports activities by universities. In fact, there is growing sentiment that put more emphasis on the importance of giving it to their universities librabries. In my opinion, I concur with the former for the three following reasons.
First of all, playing sports is a useful recreation for students after stressful studying in class. Sports are necessary for people to improve their health. Without doing exercises regularly, people are easy to get sick and lose energy for working or studying. Students also should not spend all their college time on studying, or they will lose their health while completing their degrees. Students can choose various kinds of sports such as playing badminton, going swimming or so on in spite of not being skillful at playing it.
Secondly, through sports, the students can develop both physically and mentally. Students can relax the stress due to exams by doing some proper exercises. If students keep studying for a long time without an alternative way to release stresses, they will get in an unhealthy mental condition and have risks to bring more serious problems. Having a good health is extremely indispensable to absorb knowledge, so they can learn effectively and effortlessly. Furthermore, going to sport club give the students a high opportunities to socialize and talk with other friends with different majors, habits can also enhance their communication skills.
Last but not least, significant investment in athletic activities can establish a united union among students. Some team games like football, basketball request high team spirit and community solidarity. Thus, all the members must be respect the cohesion and cooperate flexibly during the games.
To sum up briefly, I definitely agree that universities should give much amount of money to students’ sports activities because sports activities has various beneficial aspects such as making our life better and communicating well with societies.