Topic: some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible

Topic: some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Others want to live longer with their parents. Which situation do you think is better?
Essay: Time 30’. Word count : 357
Truth be told, family is the best thing in our lives, and the time that we live with our families are great time that we have in life. However, whether young adult should be independent from their families as soon as possible or not is a fascinating question. As far as I am concerned, I completely agree with this notion that young people should be independent of their parents because it will help them to improve their abilities and responsibilities, and it also helps their parents to have more chances to delight in their lives.

To begin with, since young adults become independent of their families, they will have to face with a lot of challenges in life without any support from their parents. Therefore, in order to success in the life, they have to use all their abilities to overcome a lot of difficult situations. For example, when young adults live with their families, they do not have to worry about money. However, when they leave their families, they will have to compete with others to find occupations to support themselves. Thus, competition may help young adults to obtain experiences and enhance their knowledge. Besides, young adults have to take more responsibilities in their lives to avoid a lot of harmful things in the life, such as violence or addicted drugs.

In addition, when young adults leave their families and can live well by themselves, their parents will be less tress and have more chances to relax. It is undeniable that parents always have to take care of their children while they always are busy with their business. If their children are mature enough, they will do not have to spend much time on taking care their children. As a result, they will have more time to relish their lives. In this way, young adults make their parents to become happier.

In brief, family is so important to people, and all people always want to live forever with their parents. However, we have to be independent of them because independence from parents can help us to become more mature and brings parents chances to enjoy their lives.

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