Toefl speaking question :impressive celebration

Please check my pronunciation. Thank you in advance

Hello,

I’m sorry for the delay in replying to your voice message.
Thank you for telling us about this celebration. I was able to understand most of what you said on first playback, but there were a couple of places that I had to play through more than once before I was able to piece together what you were saying.
They say practice makes perfect and I’m sure that will be true for you. Keep on posting and the strange vocabulary will become easier to say out loud.
All the best.