Which would you choose a high paying job with long hours that would give you little time with family and friends or a lower-paying job with shorter hours that would give you more with family and friends? Explain your choice using specific reasons and details.
Although the both of choices have a beneficial side, I absolutely choose the second option which is lower-paying job and more with family and friends.
My choice is a that way because I believe the life does not mean except time shared with family and friends. Turks give importance being with family and passing time with close friends for a long time. The bonds between people in my county are strong especially in families. The reason is that parents always have a concern about children, things related to household and they want to finish their work immediately and being home. It is adequate that a job which provides enough salaries to make a living for them. For instance, women are caring children’s education, nutrition in a high degree so they do not want to waste time with too much working times. This type of living makes people satisfied, prosperity and happy whole of their life.
Apart from this satisfied life obviously there are people who want to earn more and more money through working such a long hours. If you ask them their happiness they definitely give answer positive but actually it is not. Think about them they are generally alone people and also they do not what they want from life. In the beginning they have probably pleasure with their luxurious life because several prosperities such as luxurious cars, villas belongs to them thanks to their high paying job but it is a definite time which their all monetary expenses finish and when they look at the past it is seen that big hole cover their life When they are getting older friendship needs exposure but unfortunately around them there is no people because of lack of time meeting, keeping their friends or develop a family. This situation ends devastating ends for these people like having depression, suicide attempt.
Overall I am a strong follower of first life style, we are as a Turk familiar with this type and this is the best one. Working long hours and earning so much money do not help us after a while. Everybody needs friends, families to deal with daily life problems and sharing experiences with them is a best efficient way to live.
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Which would you choose a high paying job with long hours that would give you little time with family and friends or a lower-paying job with shorter hours that would give you more with family and friends? Explain your choice using specific reasons and details.
Although the both of choices have a beneficial side, I absolutely choose the second option which is THE lower-paying job and more TIME with family and friends.
My choice is a that way because I believe thAT life does not mean except time shared with family and friends. Turks give importance being with family and passing time with close friends for a long time. The bonds between people in my county are strong especially in families. The reason is that parents always have a concern about children, things related to household and they want to finish their work immediately and being home. It is adequate that a job which provides enough salaries to make a living for them. For instance, women are caring children’s education, nutrition in a high degree so they do not want to waste time with too much working times. This type of living makes people satisfied, prosperity and happy whole of their life.
Apart from this satisfied life obviously there are people who want to earn more and more money through working such a long hours. If you ask them their happiness they definitely give answer positive but actually it is not. Think about them they are generally alone people and also they do not what they want from life. In the beginning they have probably pleasure with their luxurious life because several prosperities such as luxurious cars, villas belongs to them thanks to their high paying job but it is a definite time which their all monetary expenses finish and when they look at the past it is seen that big hole cover their life When they are getting older friendship needs exposure but unfortunately around them there is no people because of lack of time meeting, keeping their friends or develop a family. This situation ends devastating ends for these people like having depression, suicide attempt.
Overall I am a strong follower of first life style, we are as a Turk familiar with this type and this is the best one. Working long hours and earning so much money do not help us after a while. Everybody needs friends, families to deal with daily life problems and sharing experiences with them is a best efficient way to live.
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Is it possible that you could improve this work a little? I really do not have the time to edit every line that you have written. I will come back to it later.