TOEFL essay - Distance learning vs Classroom program

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Warm greetings Kitos. Here is my essay with fresh thread. Please evaluate the same.

Nowadays Education is considered as one of the basic needs of human life in addition to food, shelter, clothing. We also have many ways to take education such as attending a part-time college or full-time, online computer tutorials and distance education. Distance education or online computer classes do give us flexibility of learning. But, classroom learning gives more advantages such as interacting with other fellow students, better understanding of subjects and better career prospects.

When you attend any classroom programs, you are taught by professors, lab assistants or research guide. You can spend hours in laboratory to do experiments and get practical experience. You can resolve your queries or problems by consulting professors or experts in college. Professors or faculty members, in general, are well educated and experienced. You can personally interact with them to learn and to get knowledge. But learning distantly or online places some limitations on face to face communication. Additionally, you can access library to get more knowlege, too. So you have plenty of knowledge resources available with you if you study at University classroom program.

Moreover, because of the quality education at classroom program, many universities ask for full time courses as against to any other of its kind, for their higher education programs. Likewise, due to effectiveness of classroom teaching more career options & opportunities for higher education like Phd where, you can get knowledge and do research on the subject of your own interest, are available.

Classroom programs also facilitates students to meet people from various backgrounds and to share ideas and opinions. It enables you to enhance knowledge base as well as improve interpersonal skills. For example, if we make a friend coming from different background, culture or even from different places, which you have not heard of until you meet them, you can understand more about them and learn many new things, like their tradition or customs.

So conclusively, attending a classroom program not only gives you a carriculum knowledge but also it helps you to shape your personality. Though Online computer classes or distance learning gives you the flexibility, classroom education, I think, is necessary for progress of students as a human being.

Cheers,
Vinci

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Nowadays education is considered as one of the basic needs of human life in addition to food, shelter, clothing. We also have many ways to /take/obtain/ education(,) such as attending a part-time or full-time college , online computer tutorials and distance education.
Distance education or online computer classes do give us flexibility of learning(,) but classroom learning gives more advantages(,) such as interacting with other fellow students, better understanding of subjects and better career prospects.

When you attend any classroom programs, you are taught by professors, lab assistants or research guideS. You can spend hours in A laboratory DOING experiments and GAINING practical experience. You can resolve your queries or problems by consulting professors or experts in college.
Professors or faculty members in general are well educated and experienced. You can personally interact with them to learn and ACQUIRE knowledge. But learning distantly or online places HAS some limitations on face to face communication. Additionally, you can access librarIES to get more knowlege. So you have plenty of knowledge resources available TO you if you study WITH A University classroom program.

Moreover, because of the quality educationOF A classroom program, many universities ask for full time courses as OPPOSED to any other of its kind, for their higher education programs. Likewise, due to THE effectiveness of classroom teaching(,) more career options & opportunities for higher education like Phd ARE AVAILABLE(,) where you can get knowledge and do research on the subject of your own interest.

Classroom programs also facilitate students to meet people from various backgrounds and to share ideas and opinions. It enables you to enhance YOUR knowledge base as well as improve interpersonal skills. For example, if we make a friend coming from A COMPLETELY different background, culture or even from a different place which you have not heard of until you met them, you can THEN understand more about them and learn many new things, like their traditionS or customs.

So conclusively, attending a classroom program not only gives you a cUrriculum knowledge(,) but also it helps you to shape your personality. ALThough Online computer classes or distance learning DO GIVE you the flexibility, classroom education I think, is necessary for THE progress of students as human beingS.
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Good morning Vinci. This was a well thought-out essay. Thank you.

Kitos. 8/10