hi every1, MY NAME IS AYNUR ,FROM AZERBAIJAN
it s my 1st essay here, i m gonna take an exam in december 2009 or january 2010,
it depends on ur comments,if my essay is good enough to take an exam i can take it, if i have many mistakes especially structure problems or grammar,
plzzz correct them and help me . i ll look forward to ur approach to my essay. by the way, give my essay point out of 5 ,
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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really don’t need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives .Which viewpoint do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Advertising gives us information about innovations or new products. Ads provide us with the opportunity to save our time, to know new things in technology. In addition we can decide to buy things by credit in favor of ads.
Through advertising we can buy things and can save our time. For the people, especially for women who are working, ads are more suitable. They cant enable to go and to see domestic electric appliances at the stores. So ads is the best way to came to a decision about what to buy and where to buy. Furthermore we cant choose house or car in general. It s important to go to see houses or cars if we want to buy, but it will be resulted with tiring or wasting time for us. However in this difficult situations ads help us as well. We see a lot of cars and houses ads on tv day by day. Even their pictures and all details are displayed on Tv. We bought our house with this way and it saved my parents time to go and to see every house.
Another advantage of ads is that it gives us opportunity to know about innovations in technology.I cant go every time to the stores to be informed about innovations.In this case ads help me. Seeing new services, new concessions through ads gives me a chance to be aware of them. Then I have a chance to buy and use these new services. We see a lot of ads about cell phones, computers or laptops every day. Only after some days they are changed and new ones appear. To know them ads are more crucial means.
Moreover from ads we know that we can buy things by credit, that is more suitable for the poor families. they can also buy new appliances or can change the old things with the new ones with informing by the advertisement. In today’s world there are a lot of suggestions by companies to buy furniture, even jewellery by credit with only ID. Without ads we are not aware of these concessions. So that’s ads are beneficial for any sections of society.
Consequently everything has pros and cons .In my view ads have more pros. We can save our time, can be aware of innovations and can buy things with concessions. I am sure that advertisement serves a useful purpose.