I’m Phuong, Quang’s sister, would you mind helping me correct the mistakes in my speaking? Thank you very much.
Topic: The restaurant that you would like to go to.
I’m Phuong, Quang’s sister, would you mind helping me correct the mistakes in my speaking? Thank you very much.
Topic: The restaurant that you would like to go to.
Hi Phuong, I like sushi too! Your answer was pretty good. But you went a whole minute. If you are practicing for the TOEFL, it is best to limit your answers to the time allotted on the actual test. That way you will have a better idea of about how much you should say. Your ideas here were very good, but you had a lot of pronunciation issues. Here are some:
“Is called The Hokkaido Sushi” - it should be “Is called Hokkaido Sushi” - generally restaurants don’t have “The” in front of their names
“theme” sounded like “Tim” - it should have a “th” sound and a long “e”
“cooking” sounded like “cushing”
“really love the fish tea there” this is what it sounded like, but I have never heard of fish tea
“I miss those food” - “I miss that food”, but you would only say this is you are from Japan, and thus miss the food since you no longer live there.
You use “really” really a lot!
“taste” sounded like “taze”