The high competitive in the current circumstances brings a significant changes to people’s lifestyle. People’s lifestyle gradually becomes a workaholic’s lifestyle. The effect of workaholic’s lifestyle has advantages and disadvantages for several reasons as per the below.
A workaholic’s lifestyle results to the problem of time management. A hard working people have not their personal time, because they spent most of time doing their job. They usually start job in the early morning and do it until night. Moreover, this problem causes a numerous influence in the family man. The relationship in their family will be quite distant so far, because the parents pay more attention to their job than take care their children. On the other hand, it brings about the enormous negative effects in term of health. There are many disease that are cause by a workaholic‘s lifestyle, including gastro-esophageal reflux disease, gastritis disease, obesity, and back pain. Some of these are chronic disease, and it spends long time to cure. However, most people lack of interest in their health. Even they find out that they have disease, they ignore to go to see a doctor. It leads to negative consequential outcomes in the future.
However, the advantages of workaholic’s persons are that they will get a good performance, and get promoted in accordingly. In the eye of their supervisor, they are strenuous persons, and it shows that they attach significance to the job. Thus, they become the first priority persons who are considered to get any benefits, such as promotion and salary adjustment.
To sum up, it is evident that a workaholic’s lifestyle has more disadvantage effects, especially the health. I think that it is not worth to sacrificing your health for your career. A workaholic‘s lifestyle makes you succeed in your career path, but it makes you fail in your personal‘s life.
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A workaholic’s lifestyle /results to/STEMS FROM/ the problem of time management. A h Hard working people DO NOT have not their personal time, because they spenD most of THEIR time doing their job. They usually start job WORKING in the early morning and /do it/WORK/ until night. Moreover, this problem causes a HAS numerous influence CONSEQUENCES FOR the family man. The relationshipS WITHin their family will be quite distant so far, because the parents pay more attention to their job than IN takING care OF their children. On the other hand, it ALSO brings about the enormous negative effects in termS of health. There are many diseaseS WHICH are causeD by a workaholic‘s lifestyle, including gastro-oesophageal reflux disease, gastritis disease, obesity, and back pain. Some of these are chronic diseaseS, and it spends THEY TAKE A long time to cure. However, most people lack of interest in their health. Even WHEN they find out that they have A disease, they ignore to go GOING to see a doctor. It leads to negative consequential outcomes in the future.
However, the advantages of workaholic’s persons are that they will GIVE a good performance, and get promoted in accordingly. In the eye of their supervisor, they are strenuous persons, and it shows that they attach significance to the job. Thus, they become the first priority persons who are considered to get any benefits, such as promotion and salary adjustment.
To sum up, it is evident that a workaholic’s lifestyle has more disadvantage DAMAGING effects, especially ON theIR health. I think that it is not worth to sacrificing your health for your career. A workaholic‘s lifestyle makes you succeed in your career path, but it makes CAUSES you TO fail in your personal life.
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Good morning Groffy. this is pretty good my friend, but you will only improve further by doing more reading of English publications, not grammar books.