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In definition, marriage is a promise that starts by making a simple vow and ends with death, this picturesque, tremendous and imaginary period will results in keeping two persons back to back of each other. The couples may have to face with many threats against their marriage; Sometime an agitated reaction, an arrogance decision or a grudgingly thought can cause that the chains of love between them simply falls apart which we call it a divorce. Divorcee can make a true love beaten and rusty. It is the dark side of the marriage with lots of negative effects, not just on those two persons but on people around them, especially the children whom once belonged to this life.
The children of divorce are vulnerable, sensitive and delicate. They are bereaved of having the care of both their mothers and fathers at the same place and the same time. It is like to lose one of the for having the other one, they always feel emptiness on their hearts, something like having a piece of puzzle missed, but to be forced to seek for rest of the life. This hole is called obsession. In the first place, it is the worst effect of divorce on a child who has not his character even shaped and formed yet.
Despite of these kinds of mental problems, these children are the only witnesses of their parent’s fights. They see the violent between two grown-up persons. And what do you think will happen then? After getting mature, they always will have problems with the marriage. Some will get frightened of this natural part of the life and some will accept it through a strict violent repercussion it contains. They are all incompetent for handling this burden and will suffer from that anyhow. So, unusual extroversive treatments are the second outstanding result of divorce.
More than those two problems, it will have bitter and intense effects on society. These children are supposed to become the propulsion assets of future for that society. It will be hard for a person with lots of stress, aggressive acts and such isolated to find a chance to grow up and progress amongst the normal people. Their delicate sensuality can lead them to get involved with negative things like drug addiction much easier than a normal person with strong character, or other threats that can harm them.
All in All, as much as a marriage is sweet, a divorce is bitter, not for both married persons, but mostly for the children of divorce. Although it’s unavoidable and in some cases, a divorce can save a life, but it will show its negative affects on delicate side of that, the children. It cause obsession, aggressive treatments in their maturity and lots of negative harms for the society.
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