First of all, I thank you from the bottom of my heart for checking my TOEFL essays. I followed your advise and my TOEFL exam went really well. I got my score; it’s 116/120. Here’s the breakdown of my score:
You’ve been a great mentor! Thank you for your support (I could not have gotten a 29 in writing without your help) Anglophile and Torsten have also given good tips and I thank them too!
I also responded to the PM you sent me earlier. I am applying to college (undergraduate) and I would be eternally grateful to you if you proofread my college essays.