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The given bar chart illustrates how many computers and Internet using for every 1000 residents in 9 nations of the Arab World.
Overall, it is clearly indicated that the gap of using computers and Internet between these countries is rather big. Moreover, the numbers of computers and Internet per 1000 people in UAE are highest among 9 regions.
In terms of the quantities of computers per 1000 inhabitants, there are over 150 computers, about 140 computers and 50 computers in UAE, Kuwait and S. Araba respectively while Egypt, Jordan, Morocco, Oman and Syria witness under 50 computers.
Regarding as the numbers of internet users for every 1000 people in the nations, UAE register a predominance with nearly 350 people while just 100 people in Kuwait can access to Internet and a mere 80 Internet user in Lebanon. By contrast, there are 6 countries – Egypt, Jordan, Morocco, Oman, S. Arabia and Syria having under 50 residents using Internet.