Some people think all lawbreakers should be put into prison. Discuss the view

Hi everyone here is my attempt to write a paragraph. Please give some feedback. Thank you !!

There are those who believe that offenders should be sent into prison for two reasons. Firstly, imprisonment can be utilized to reform criminal offenders effectively. Being contained in cells and deprived of freedom, lawbreakers are more likely to repent of the severe crime they committed, contributing to the decline in reconviction rates. Secondly, the policy of incarceration has a distinct benefit as it issues a warning to potential perpetrators not to commit a crime. Without this harsh punishment, people would increasingly take an illegal path and pose a threat to society.

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Hi Quang, here are my thoughts on your paragraph:

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Hello, Oneanother
I agree with the idea of your subject. Offenders and lawbreakers must be punished.

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