Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient.

Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient.
Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion?

It is hard to imagine modern life without computers.
Computers are an extraordinary invention that changed the way we are working, playing , the way how we live. The ability to store great amount of information and perform many tasks in one period of time make it irreplaceable in everyday life. We can find it almost everywhere, from simple toys for little kids to the MP3 players and cell phones; from the bank to the hospital, and so on.

Personal computers become a great tool in learning process and communication between the people. It helping us to find information we needed online, we can writ it down an saved it until later. It saves us time and make our tasks easy.
Thanks to computers, long-distance telecommunications become possible, that is also giving you chance to see your party, not only hear them. It is very handy when you are far away from home.
Like everything in this world, computers has not only advantages, but disadvantages too.

One of them is easy access to the whole kind of information and also bad one. It is very important to restrict kids access to that kid of information. Also, it is not healthy to spend long time in front of the computer playing games or chatting online. Wile it is time consuming, it is also badly affect their vision.

All in all, I think in general computers have more positive effects than negative, and it is a grate innovation in the history of mankind.

Thanks in advance.

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Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient.
Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion?

It is hard to imagine modern life without computers.
Computers are an extraordinary invention that HAVE changed the way we are working, playing, the way how we live. The ability to store great amountS of information and perform many tasks in one period of time make it irreplaceable in everyday life. We can find it almost everywhere, from simple toys for little CHILDREN to the MP3 players and cell phones; from the bank to the hospital, and so on.

Personal computers HAVE become a great tool in THE learning process and communication between the people. It helping THEY HELP us to find information we ARE SEEKING online WHICH we can THEN writE it down anD saved it SAVE until later. THEY SAVE us time and make our tasks easy.
Thanks to COMPUTER TECHNOLOGY, long-distance telecommunications HAVE become possible BY giving you THE chance to see your CONTACT, not only hear them. It is very handy when you are far away from home.
Like everything in this world, computers HAVE not only advantages, but disadvantages too.

One of them is easy access to the whole ALL kindS of information(.) and also bad one. ESPECIALLY VULGAR SITES.
It is very important to restrict CHILDRENS access to that kid of information. Also, it is not healthy to spend long PERIODS OF time in front of the computer playing games or chatting online. WHile it is time consuming, it is also badly affectS their vision.

All in all, I think in general computers have more positive effects than negative, and THEY ARE a GREAT innovation in the history of mankind.

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Good morning Id. Never write kids, always children. More clarity is needed in your work. Consider first what you wish to say before just writing whatever comes into your head.

Kitos. 7.5/10

Good morning Kitos.
Thank you for your help.