Should it be "their" instead? I

Bee Choo believes that everyone deserves to have a head full of beautiful hair without having to burn a hole in your pocket.

Shouldn’t it be “their” instead?

Thanks.

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Yes, it should be ‘their’.

I think the flow would be better as follows.

…without burning a hole in their pocket

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I agree with NN, otherwise you get ‘his or her’ and therefore the sentence avoids gender-specific language, although ‘your’ is 'grammatically correct.

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Yes. It should be ‘their’ as it functions as the pronoun for ‘everyone’.

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