Sentence: My Request you which procedure we are make on meter replacement...

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please correct my grammer mistake

My Request you which procedure we are make on meter replacement in sap for faulty code but some time we were found old meter total brunt and ash while that time meter replacaed under code 23[meter brunt] which process you made in zdrm for meter removal data update there one option code -20[ meter brunt & not recoverable ] if same procedure we use meter replacement for brunt and ash. i thing it is good all of you

i waiting your reply.

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I think that before you ask us to correct your mistakes (you said just one mistake), you should take care of the easy stuff first, by spellchecking, punctuating and fixing the capitalization.

Before you submit something to be corrected, you should fix the obvious mistakes yourself first.