Hi guys,
I changes the way I write essay, and I would like to know if you like this essay or not.
Some people say that artists such as painters, writers and musicians affect our life more than scientists. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience.
The Importance of science and art on human life especially in the last two centuries is an undeniable fact. There are many people who hold the idea that science has less influence on our life than that of artistic works. This essay deals with arguments for and against this controversial issue.
Those who are in favor of art believe that it was artistic works which has changed our boring life into a wonderfully interesting one. Art is a way of expressing our feelings such as fears, sadness, happiness and objections. Only by art was human capable to complain about unfairness in societies. That protest singers, song writers and authors played a significant role to put an end on (flames /shadows) of war during the Cold War is indisputable. This is the most impressive argument among the supporters of arts.
The supporters of science argue that it was the outcome of scientists that saved primitive men’s life from life-threatening dangers leading them from caves to the modern luxurious lifestyles. Human race owe to fruits of technology if our means of transportation are moving around the globe, rate of infant fatality decreased and humans’ average life span increased. We are now extracting invaluable minerals from depth of earth to be used in different ways resulting our life much more easy than our ancestors. These achievement are not at least a direct result of arts.
Considering the impact of science or arts as the primary factor of improvement in human life has become a matter of intense debate. While some strongly advocate the arts, others argue that the focus should be on the influence of science. This essay elaborated on both views with some relevant experiences.
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Thanks in advance,
Amir
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