revising of two dinosauric sentences

Would you be kind enough to revise the following dinosauric sentences that, beyond doubt, are an imperfect product as a result of the violent efforts of your humble servant?

In view of the fact that I didn’t know your bank account I sent &1000 to Raja’s account. Please, make inquiries in concert with Raja of her account and transfer together with her the mentioned above money to your name.

Would you please revise the following [old? big? cold-blooded? vicious?]sentences that I have written imperfectly?

I didn’t know your bank account number, so I sent Rp 1000 to Raja’s account. Please contact her to transfer that money to you.