Would you be kind enough to revise the following sentence?
At first it is like a tightness across my heart which goes up behind my sternum and then I feel it in my left shoulder and down at left upper arm.
Thanks for your efforts.
Would you be kind enough to revise the following sentence?
At first it is like a tightness across my heart which goes up behind my sternum and then I feel it in my left shoulder and down at left upper arm.
Thanks for your efforts.