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[b]You want to sell some of your furniture; you think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter

• Explain why you are selling
• Describe the furniture
• Suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture[/b]

Hi Suresh,

How are you? Hope you are fine. I am fine here. I heard that you are looking for furniture for your home.

My company had given me opportunity to work at client location Sydney, Australia. As it is long term assignment, I have decided to vacate the house and would like to sell my furniture.

Firstly, dining table with glass top and 4 cushion chairs which is in decent look, coffee table of brown in color and double cot bed of 5 feet which is of black color. All these furniture is well maintained.

If you are interested, visit to my home on 20/06/2012, Wednesday to see the furniture whether it is suitable to you or not. Otherwise, I will convey to my other friends. I have to sell this furniture before I go to onsite opportunity.

I will be waiting for your visit, hope you will like this furniture.

Yours faithfully,

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Hi, your letter is pretty clear and answers all the quiestions correctly. YOu have some grammatical errors though and some phrases which sound somewhat unnatural. Overall, I would rate this a band 5.