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Depending on personal experience, personality type and personal believes we find that while some people prefer to shop in supermarkets, others disagree, and content that it is better to shop in small shops and markets. Before determining which of these two positions is stronger, it is essential to examine them both in detail.

Those in favor of shopping in supermarkets believe that shopping in supermarkets save time since supermarkets are “one stop shop”, where one can stop and buy everything he needs or wants at once. Also, supermarkets offer a large verity of products and brands, more than any other shop or market. Furthermore, we must consider that supermarkets usually accept all kind of payment methods (cash, credit cards, checks and coupons) and also offer their customers’ membership cards that save money. Finally, all supermarkets have free parking lots which make them more accessible and friendly to the shopper.

In contrast to this position are those who oppose shopping in supermarkets. First and foremost, they claim that supermarket harm small business, which can’t compete with large conglomerates. Moreover, they believe that small shops and markets - as appose to supermarkets - give authentic shopping experience. In addition, they hold that shops and markets usually keep in stock fresh vegetables and meat while supermarkets keep also refrigerated supply. Finally, small shops and markets treat their workers’ better and protect their rights.

After carefully considering the above evidence, it is clear that this first position is stronger of the two. When we consider the time factor, verity of products and brands, payment methods and accessibility, it is clear that it is better to shop in supermarkets than in small shops and markets.

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Depending on personal experience, personality type and personal belieFS we find that while some people prefer to shop in supermarkets, others disagree, and contenD that it is better to shop in small shops and markets. Before determining which of these two positions is stronger, it is essential to examine them both in detail.

Those in favor of shopping in supermarkets believe that shopping in supermarkets saveS time since supermarkets are “one stop shopS”, where one can stop and buy everything he needs or wants at once. Also, supermarkets offer a large veAriEty of products and brands, more than any other shop or market. Furthermore, we must consider that supermarkets usually accept all kindS of payment methods (cash, credit cards, checks and coupons) and also offer their customers’ membership cards that save money. Finally, all supermarkets have free parking lots which make them more accessible and friendly to the shopper.

In contrast to this position are those who oppose shopping in supermarkets. First and foremost, they claim that supermarket harm small businessES, WHO can’t compete with large conglomerates. Moreover, they believe that small shops and markets - as OpposeD to supermarkets - give authentic shopping experience. In addition, they hold that shops and markets usually keep in stock fresh vegetables and meat while supermarkets keep also refrigerated supplIES. Finally, small shops and markets treat their workers’ better and protect their rights.

After carefully considering the above evidence, it is clear that this first position is THE stronger of the two. When we consider the time factor, vAriEty of products and brands, payment methods and accessibility, it is clear that it is better to shop in supermarkets than in small shops and markets.
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A concise essay Danu. Well done.

Kitos. 8.5/10

Thank you!