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The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph above depicts the diverse work instances among both men and women by a survey which was conducted during 1998-1999.

The horizontal axis indicates the hours of leisure time, while the vertical one shows the status of the workers. Obviously, both retired and unemployed employers were fairly similar in their hours of free time 82 for males and 78 for females for each.

Surprisingly, we see there is no part-taking for males in both housewives and employed part time careers only for women by 50 and 40 respectively, ultimately employed of full time workers recorded 50 houses for males and just under 40 for females.

We infer that unemployed and retired workers obtained nearly 2 times more that both employed part and full time workers of their allocated leisure time

TOEFL listening lectures: A university lecture by a professor of Anthropology

The graph above depicts the diverse work instances among both men and women by a survey which was conducted during 1998-1999.

The VERTICAL axis indicates the hours of leisure time, while the HORIZONTAL line shows the status of the workers. Obviously, both retired and unemployed employers were fairly similar in their hours of free time 82HOURS for males and 78 HOURS for females .

Surprisingly, we see there is no part-TIME WORK BEING UNDERTAKEN BY MEN WHILST FEMALES WERE PREPARED TO DO PART-TIME WORK. FULL TIME MALE WORKERS ENJOYED FIFTY HOURS OF LEISURE TIME AS AGAINST FEMALES WHO ONLY HAD AROUND FORTY HOURS, although housewives seemed to have a good number of LEISURE hours, being betterED only by those females who were either unemployed or retired. The unemployed, naturally, had more leisure time than any other group taking part in the survey.
We infer from this that unemployed and retired workers obtained nearly twice the leisure time than that of both employed part and full time workers.

You did notice that you had quoted the axis wrongly?