Please help me with my paragraph, thank you very much!

The abstract consists of three sections that are well presented. However, The objectives and research results should be further clarified. I think this manuscript is best suited for publication in a social science journal.

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Hi, I think this is fine, except “The” before “objectives” should not be capitalized.

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Yes, I see. Thanks for contributing, Luschen.

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