TOURISM
Tourism is one of the most significant factors for all of countries. From the past to the present people have gave tourisim a big value. To understant importance of tourism it is necessary to find some answers for these questions. Why do each country need tourism to improv their economy and why do tourism has a big value for them?
First of all, tourism brings comfortable and peace for all of countries. For example, if a lot of tourists go to a country, this country can develop in tersm of economy. Likewise, it become a very beautiful relationship between this country and the others. For this reason, a lot of people can have new foreign friends. Similarly, it is not possible to fight one coutry to another if tourism is available between them because due to tourisim it increase the relationship between coutries. On the other hand, thanks to tourism people who live in the same country can become friend easily because tourism provides them enough money and time. Second, tourisim offers us some facilities such as going abroad and to see a lot of historical arts. For instance, as a tourist a person can go to the USA and see statue of liberty in the island of liberty. We know that it is difficult to go from one country to another, but if you are a tourist, it is very easy for you. Third, tourism provides job for people. For example,Tourism can develop exportation and importation among countries and in this way countries improve their economy and provide more job for their civilizes.
As a result, all of these conculitions show that each country need tourism to improve their economy and all of people give tourism a big value. In summarize, all of above station state that tourism is important and valuable for all of countries and their people.
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TOURISM
Tourism is one of the most significant factors for all countries. From the past to the present people have GIVEN TOURISM a big value. To understanD THE importance of tourism it is necessary to find some answers for these questions. Why doES each country need tourism to improvE ITS economy(,) and why doES tourism HAVE SUCH a big IMPORTANCE TO them?
First of all, tourism brings comfortable and peace for all of countries. For example, if a lot of tourists go to a country, this country can develop in TERMS of ITS economy. Likewise, it CREATES a very beautiful relationship between this country and the others. For this reason, a lot of people can FIND new foreign friends. Similarly, it is not possible to fight one couNtry AGAINST another if tourism is available between them(,) because due to tourism it increaseS the relationship between couNtries. On the other hand, thanks to tourism people who live in the same country can become friendS easily because tourism provides them WITH enough money and FREE time.
Second, tourism offers us some facilities(,) such as going abroad and seeING a lot of historical arts. For instance, as a tourist a person can go to the USA and see THE Statue of Liberty ON the island of Liberty. We know that it is difficult to go from one country to another, but if you are a tourist, it is very easy for you.
Third, tourism provides jobS for people. For example,tourism can INCREASE exportation and importation among countries(,) and in this way countries improve their economy and provide more job for their civilizes.
As a result, all of these CONCLUSIONS show that each country needS tourism to improve their economy and all of people give tourism a big value. In summarY, all of above station state that tourism is important and valuable for all of countries and their people.
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Quite good Abdusselam.
Kitos. 7.5/10
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