Topic: It is better to enjoy your money when you earn it or you should save it for some time in future?
Earning money for living is not easy problems but spending money rightly seem to be more difficult because of different attitudes people hold toward their money. However, personally, comparing enjoying money and saving money for future, the former will bring more benefit for me.
Firstly, healthy improvement is the most important factor why I shold enjoy money for. There is a quote that “having good health means having all”.Need less to say, work often make us exhausted, stressful. This is absolutely not good thing and is reason why we should pay more attention to caring my health. Vacations at weekends is nice ideals to help you reduce stress. Nutrient food, useful medicine help you be healthier. Therefore, I stand on golden chance to focus more on work, earn more money, etc. By and large, spending money for health enhancement certainly to be a right action
Secondly, that spending money to cultivate life ranks an equal important role. Some people say that we try to earn money to live better, so why must we work hard, how can we live better while we do not enjoy them? Owning a comfortable house, buying modern equipment is the most effective way to cultivate our living conditions. This helps us live more conveniently then will be long-lived and have more time to come into nice life
Finally, investment is a typical reason for the preference enjoying money. I think that if we put money in pocket, it has no use. Money just is the thing to exchange everything, thus It only has price when is used. For this reason, instead of saving them I want to invest them. This not only help me have more money but also reduce risks of inflation when saving them. More interestingly, It will be my contribution to the development of economy in my country
Summary, improving health, bettering living standards and investing for more lucrative are the most worthy reason why I will make plan using money as soon as I am economically independent. I highly recommend people should carefully analysis the advantages of enjoying money to enter the life without inhibition.
This essay I wrote in more than an hours. I tried to write it in 30 mins but after that I had to checked many mistakes both grammar and ideals. I have gotten stuck in brainstorming and explaining my ideas.
About my ideas, do you think they are convincing enough? should I write more in body paragraphs? Sometime, I feel that my supporting details are quite dull.
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