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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer.

Several research studies and an overwhelming number of articles in the popular press discuss suggested theories behind one’s behavior. While an ancient theory argues the possible effective role of one’s way of clothing in how he behaves, recent studies cast doubt on this theory and point out the dominant role of other factors such as environment on one’s behavior. Furthermore, according to psychological studies, building up one’s attitude takes a great amount of time and cannot be shaped simply by way of dressing up. Additionally, there are several representative examples of people who show the same behavior regardless of what they wear.

Although human being’s personality seems complex, challenging and debatable, all psychologists are unanimous in stating the fact that one’s personality forms throughout the time and requires many years to develop. It is an accepted fact that shaping one’s personality is not a matter of hours or days; that is, it needs years to form. In other words, clothes, as temporary varying factors, cannot modify one’s behavior.

A further point to keep in mind is that one’s actions are considerably affected by environment. According to a psychological study on two hundred men and women, environment factors are the major contributors in shaping one’s personality; in other words, factors such as friends and family play the principle roles in building up one’s attitude. Comparing environment factors with ways of clothing, we can clearly conclude the minor or even nonexistent role of clothing in shaping one’s behaviors.

A further example that clarifies the concept is those whom we love; no matter how they dress up. We have so many friends whom we admire; regardless of their way of clothing. As people dress up differently in different occasions, it would be an obvious fact that clothing cannot affect the way people behave, otherwise we would have changed our outlook toward our friends and our loved ones in various occasions.

To put it in a nutshell, clothes do not make one’s behavior worse or better. Behavior is a complex entity which is greatly affected by environment and time pass. Given the fact that one’s action are modified according to his environment, it might be wise to raise up our kids in a peaceful friendly atmosphere where they can foster good behavior

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Hi Gyna, another excellent essay. Your really have only a couple outright errors. But some of your phrases do not sound completely natural to me - especially “way of clothing”. Still, you essay is quite persuasive with numerous examples and good paragraph development. I would rate it a 4.5 out of 5.

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