Parents are the best teachers

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Certainly, I totally agree with the saying that parents are the best teachers, since my parents have taught me lots of things throughout these years. I will explain this statement as follows.

To begin with, my parents have educated me to behave properly, as I was a misbehaved child. They believe that good manners must be learnt from childhood; hence, they always highlight the three must-say phrases: please, thank you and excuse-me. At first, I could not understand or even stand social conventions; however, if it were not for their social lessons, I would become an impolite and anti-social person.

Next, my mom and my dad supported me when I first started studying at primary school. On the one hand, my mom used to hold a dictionary at hand and look for the words that I did not understand. Besides, she often took diagnostic tests to make sure that I had learnt new vocabulary. On the other hand, my dad is an amazing story-teller and he has fostered my passion for reading books.

Another point is that they have been through a lot of tough moments, because they immigrated to another country and started from scratch. They had difficulties in learning a new language and making a living at first. Not only did they deal with discrimination but they also suffered from deceits; however, later they succeeded in opening others’ hearts and minds.

Finally, they have coached me to make decisions on my own and cope with the consequences of my actions. As a matter of fact, they let me make mistakes but they do not tell me off, as they know that my faults speak for themselves.

Summing up, I have learnt a great deal from my parent’s life experiences and I have cherished their encouragement in my studies and my own decisions. So, I definitely believe they are the best teachers ever.

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A heart-warming essay Milily. You wrote well and the few slight errors that there are would not be easily noticed by eyes less vigilant than mine. :-))

Kitos 8/10

I have corrected three mistakes. Is there any more that I did not notice?

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Certainly, I totally agree with the saying that parents are the best teachers, since my parents have taught me lots of things throughout these years. I will explain this statement as follows.

To begin with, my parents have educated me to behave properly, as I was a /misbehaved/MISCHIEVOUS/ child. They believeD that good manners /must/HAD TO/SHOULD/ be learnt from childhood; hence, they always highlightED the three must-say phrases: please, thank you and excuse-me.
At first, I could not understand or even stand social conventions; however, if it were not for their social lessons, I would HAVE become an impolite and anti-social person.

Next, my mom and my dad supported me when I first started studying at primary school. On the one hand, my mom used to hold a dictionary /at/IN HER hand and look for the words that I did not understand.
Besides, She often took diagnostic tests to make sure that I had learnt new vocabulary. On the other hand, my dad is an amazing story-teller and he has fostered my passion for reading books.

Another point is that they have been through a lot of tough moments, because they immigrated INto another country and started from scratch. They had difficulties in learning a new language and making a living at first. Not only did they deal with discrimination but they also suffered from deceits; however, they later succeeded in opening THE hearts and minds OF others’.

Finally, they have coached AND ENCOURAGED me to make decisions on my own, and TO cope with the consequences of my actions. As a matter of fact, they let me make mistakes but they do not tell me off, as they know that my faults speak for themselves.

Summing up, I have learnt a great deal from my parent’s life experiences, and I have cherished their encouragement in my studies and IN THE MAKING OF my own decisions. So, I definitely believe they are the best teachers ever.

You are pretty good Milily.

Mixmixi

@Mixmixi: Thanks for your support.

@Kitos: Thank you for your review. It seems that I overlooked so many things in this essay.