Of which 10 of them

In fact, it was reported on Friday that the police have arrested 29 women of various nationalities, aged between 20 and 47, in an operation targeting pivoted KTVs, of which 10 of them will be deported as their short-term visit passes and work passes were cancelled.

Is “of which 10 of them” correct?

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Here is my version:

In fact, it was reported on Friday that police arrested 29 women of different nationalities, aged between 20 and 47, in an operation targeting KTVs, 10 of whom will get deported as their short-term visit passes and work cards have been cancelled.

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