Nowadays motorized flight is considered as the most important

Nowadays motorized flight is considered as the most important and influential invention in the world. Not any other invention has such a significant impact on our lives. Do you agree?

Due to the incredible invention of motorized flight, the world has been transformed into a global village and many impossibilities, such as an efficient long-distance travel unimagined in the past, have been realized definitely. As a result, some people eulogize it as the most important ever in human history, and I, however, doubt the validity of this assertion.

Indeed, there is no denying that people enjoy higher mobility spurred by cross-national flights. In the past, it was unlikely that people could work in one country, and live in another country, but at present, it is the fact for many employees in a multi-national company. Even if what has mentioned is true, it does not necessarily mean that motorized flight is more influential than others.

Computer alters the way people work. With the help of the Internet, people can access information more efficiently, can download what they need punctually, and can e-mail their friends economically. If computer had not entered people’s lives, we would have continued to copy an unbearable number of books by hand and wrote numerous letters in paper, which forecasts more rainforest destruction. The invention of the mobile phone is another case in point to testify that it is not convincing that motorized flight is the most influential. Pressing buttons, we can have an immediate contact with our friends no matter how far they are. Thus we feel more secure, for cell phones can always keep us integrated to a social web. In contrast, the days without mobile phones seem totally unimaginable, especially when we are eager to inform others of urgent matters, and unfortunately, they are not around.

Motorized flight is the summit of human wisdom, but we can never go too far in maintaining motorized flight is the most significant. It is hoped that more inspirational inventions can benefit human life.

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Nowadays motorized flight is considered as the most important and influential invention in the world. Not any other invention has such a significant impact on our lives. Do you agree?

Due to the incredible invention of motorized flight, the world has been transformed into a global village and many impossibilities, such as an efficient long-distance travel(,) unimagined in the past, have been realized definitely. As a result, some people eulogize it as the most important STEP ever in human history, and I, however, doubt the validity of this assertion.

Indeed, there is no denying that people enjoy higher mobility spurred by cross-national flights. In the past, it was unlikely that people could work in one country, and live in another country, but at present, it is the fact for many employees in a multi-national company. Even if what has mentioned is true, it does not necessarily mean that motorized flight is more influential than others.

Computer ALTER the way people work. With the help of the Internet, people can access information more efficiently, can download what they need punctually, and can e-mail their friends economically. If THE computer had not entered people’s lives, we would have continued to copy an unbearable number of books by hand and wrIte numerous letters ON paper, which forecasts more rainforest destruction. The invention of the mobile phone is another case in point to testify that it is not convincing that motorized flight is the most influential. Pressing buttons, we can have an immediate contact with our friends no matter how far AWAY they are. Thus we feel more secure, for cell phones can always keep us integrated to a social web. In contrast, the days TO BE without mobile phones seem totally unimaginable, especially when we are eager to inform others of urgent matters, and unfortunately, they are not around.

Motorized flight is the summit of human wisdom, but we can never go too far in maintaining motorized flight AS the most significant. It is hoped that more inspirational inventions can benefit human life.
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Good work Sean.

Kitos. 8/10