My voice once again

Hi everyone,
I hope that this voice message finds all of you well & content. Ah… I’d like to give a special note of thanks to Mr. Toresten sir, for reminding me of what I should do.
Okay I will do it now.

I’ll read it out what I have written below. IT’S A SAMPLE TEXT. (Courtesy: WWE)

[color=darkred]Hi, this is your superstar Noren with a very important message for all our viewers. The moves that we do in the ring take years of practice to perfect and do it safely. So, what I urge all our viewers is NEVER try to copy what we do in the ring at home or at school. Stay safe. Don’t try this.

That’s it. I look forward to your feedback. Thank you.
Regards
Noren

Hi Noren,

Good to hear from you and thank you for your message. I thought you did it very well. The only point I would make is that if you spoke a little more slowly, you would more easily be understood. I am thinking of certain phrases such as: ‘a special vote of thanks’ ‘copy what we do’. Look forward to hearing more.

Alan

Dear Alan sir,
Though late, thank you very much for your feedback. It will be very helpful for me as far as my spoken English is concerned. Thank you a lot once again.
Noren