Self elocution lessons. Learning to speak RP.
Hi and welcome!
By the way, where’s the recording? I can’t see it…
I have trouble hearing the recording because the quality is so poor.
Same here.
Either your mike is on the fritz, or you need to tweak your mic settings on your computer.
Also make sure that the active mic is the one you’re using, in case you have more than one mic.
By the way, in my opinion, the title should read “Comments are always welcome”. 
Sorry my previous microphone was spoilt. Here is an audible recording of me with my normal everyday voice.
Still quite far from RP as you can tell.