Mistakes in this sentence: Hi, Marya! How are you? Don't forget to send the phone

English as a Second Language English Vocabulary, Grammar and Idioms
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Hello!

Is there any mistakes in this sentence?

“Hi, Marya! How are you? Don’t forget to send the phone number of Mr. Adam to me. Please try to send it soon.Thanks Tom”

Thankx

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Hi,
No! But I think it’s better to say “Mr. Adam’s phone number” and “Please do it as soon as possible.”
Thanks,
Tom
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