Many people have learned a foreign language in their own country; others have lea

[[size=150]color=red]Many people have learned a foreign language in their own country; others have learned a foreign language in the country in which it is spoken. Which is better? Give advantages of each and support your viewpoint[/size]

There are a lot of ways to learn foreign language. People sometimes prefer to learn foreign languages in their own countries while others prefer to learn among native speakers in the country in which it is spoken. However from my point of view both methods have more advantages, but I would prefer to learn new language in the country in which it is spoken.

Learning new language in your own country has more advantages. It allows people to learn more foreign languages rather than one. There are lots of polyglots who learned ten to twelve foreign languages by themselves in their own country. In this case they are able to learn more languages by watching television channels. Additionally they realize it by reading more books of those nations, by paying more attention to grammar rather than general speaking. On the contrary, you may not have a chance to visit to any foreign country to learn language if you learn a lot of languages. Moreover, if you are amid native speakers you are not interested in their books to improve your speaking due to having lots of other options to improve speaking.

Learning new language in the country in which it is spoken has also more advantages. It contributes people to learn faster, to speak fluenlty, not to make mistakes in pronunciation and to improve learning skills properly. What is more, it allows people to get equal good results in listening and reading as well as speaking. Moreover they are able to use relevant phrases and idioms and make more foreign friends as well.

Although both ways have benefits, I would prefer to learn among native speakers. First of all, I am a student and I do not have more time to spend years to learn a language, but I believe that I can learn foreign language fluently in foreign country in a month. In fact, my parents learned Russian language in Russia in a few months although they did not know anything when they went there. So, I am sure that I can speak more efficiently in England if I want to learn English rather than in my country, because I am not willing to read more books, to watch English channels every day. At this point being amidst the English would be great chance to learn this language to a high level.

[color=brown]KISTOSDAD I COULD NOT get what does this essay wants me to write. i coul not understand how i must i write such kind of essays. Because this question is a bit different from others. I always chose one option and support it with 3 ideas in paragraphs. What about this essay and what is the right STRUCTURE FOR THIS ESSAY ? CAN U HELP KITOS PLZZ.

REGARDS

TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between two students in their dormitory during registration week

PLZZ EVALUATE this one and give me point out of 15

There are /a lot/LOTS/ of ways to learn foreign languageS.
People sometimes prefer to learn foreign languages in their own countries while others prefer to learn among native speakers in the country in which it is spoken.
However, from my point of view, both methods have more advantages, but I would prefer to learn A new language in the country in which it is spoken.

Learning A new language in your own country has more advantages. It allows people to learn more foreign languages rather than one. There are lots of polyglots who HAVE learned ten to twelve foreign languages by themselves in their own country.
In this case they /are/WERE/ able to learn /more/OTHER/ languages by watching AND LISTENING TO television channels.
Additionally they /realize/ACCOMPLISHED/ it by reading /more/MANY/ books of those nations AND by paying more attention to grammar rather than TO general speaking. On the contrary, you may not have a chance to visit to any foreign country to learn ITS language if you WANT TO learn a lot of languages. Moreover, if you are /amid/SURROUNDED BY/LIVING WITH/ native speakers you are not interested in their books to improve your speaking, due to having lots of other options to improve speaking.

Learning A new language in the country in which it is spoken has also more advantages. It /contributes/ENCOURAGES/ people to learn faster, to speak fluenTLy, /not to make/TO ERADICATE/ mistakes in pronunciation, and to improve learning skills properly. What is more, it allows people to get equalLY good results in listening and reading as well as speaking. Moreover they are able to /use/LEARN/COPY/ relevant phrases and idioms and make more foreign friends /as well/AT THE SAME TIME/.

Although both ways have benefits, I would prefer to learn among native speakers. First of all, I am a student and I do not have /more/THE/ time to spend years /to learn/IN LEARNING/ a NEW language, but I believe that I can learn A foreign language fluently in A foreign country in a month.(REALLY???)

In fact, my parents learned THE Russian language in Russia in a few months, /although/EVEN THOUGH/ they did not know /anything/ONE WORD/ when they FIRST went there.
So, I am sure that I can LEARN TO speak more efficiently in England if I want to learn English, rather than in my OWN country, because I am not willing to read more books OR to watch English channels every day.
At this point, being /amidst the/SURROUNDED BY/ English PEOPLE would be A great chance FOR ME to learn this language to a high /level/STANDARD
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Good afternoon Kleo. I think you have handled the writing of this essay pretty well, although you have displayed a limitation in your vocabulary. Nevertheless, you did OK.
10/15.

Kitos.