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When we talk about money, there are a lot of different ideas. Many people have low opinion of making a large amount of money because it can develop human greed with money. However, in my opinion, the desire to make a lot of money is an innate human characteristic. Like many people, I agree that making large amounts of money is necessary because money helps with our hobbies, provides proof of our capacity, and brings us more power.
First of all, making a lot of money fulfills one’s hobbies. For some people, they have costly hobbies such as wearing fashionable clothes or collecting old artifacts. Therefore, only with large amounts of money could they be satisfied. As for me, I dream of opening a large library for poor people, so I definitely want to earn a lot of money. Hence, money can help people like me realize their dream.
Another reason for the importance of making large amounts of money is that money is a proof of our capacity. In any case, highly-qualified people receive higher salary than ordinary people do: A Chief Executive Officer earns more than an employee does, and a successful investor has more money than a common investor. Furthermore, a person is satisfied with his or her large amounts of money because many people praise for this triumph and show their respect for him or her. For example, most of celebrities, such as Donald Trump, Bill Gates, are learned from and lauded for earning a lot of money.
The third reasons why I support making large amounts of money is that it brings people with power. It can be the power to effectively change the world. In fact, it’s hard to find world’s wealthy people who don’t donate part of there asset to charities. They may use their money to build the disabled home, open new schools for poor children, and so on. With their money, they can also have a louder voice in a meeting, especially in a corporation. Therefore, they have the most right to make a decision.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that making a lot of money is very important for our lives. Although it may result in unexpected outcomes, people can still deal with it with their self- control.
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