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There is no doubt that in many places comfort plays a significant role in our daily lives. Some say that when our grandparents were children life was better since there were less pollution and crime, while others disagree. Both sides may have their own reasons to support their views. If I had to choose one, I would say that life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when our grandparents were children. Here are some reasons why.
First and foremost, we give the marvels of technology credits. We do not sometimes realize that we are using machines that haven’t been here in this world before. Such as an air conditioner, a washing machine, a dryer, and even computers and phones. For example, when my grandparents had something to tell somebody, they had to walk all the way to their houses no matter how far it was. However, we are carrying a nice smartphone all the time and call or message someone. We don’t even have to meet them in person to talk.
Another reason worth mentioning is that our life expectancy has increased with the advances in medicine. People believe that we can live over one hundred years old. Back in the time of my grandparents was different. If someone made it until 60 years old they throw a party to celebrate. Many people died from measles, chicken pox, rubella, etc. My grandmother used to say that she had total six children but three of them died when they were young from diseases. How thankful we are today. If we have ten children, they all can survive with the advancement of medicine.
In brief, l strongly believe that life today is easier and more comfortable with technology and better medicine for the reasons mentioned above. All in all, if we did not have these, we would have fallen behind and still struggle with discomfort. the importance of advanced life in the pursuit of comfort cannot be overstated.