Hi everybody,
please find attached a draft application.
Could we have your comments?
Many thanks
Yours Lars and 6 very nice Ladies
Draft application
Dear Sir or Madam,
my name is …………. I’m a secretary (Bürokauffrau). At the moment I am in a Business English seminar in order to improve my English Language Communication skill.
I offer to you a one month internship (Praktikum) in your company. I could imagine shaping your English language communication (telephone conversation, English Commercial letters/correspondence, etc.).
As far as the formal context of my internship (Praktikum) is concerned it will be without any costs and risks for you. The Agency for Labour (Agentur für Arbeit) will finance this internship.
I am looking forward for your positive response and your invitation for a working meeting in your company.
My name is …………. I AM EMPLOYED AS a BUSINESS secretary (Bürokauffrau). At the moment I am ATTENDING a Business English seminar in order to improve my English Language Communication SKILLS.
I WOULD LIKE TO offer to you a one month internship (Praktikum) in your company. I WOULD SEE MYSELF OVERSEEING your English language communication (telephone conversation, English Commercial letters/correspondence, etc.).
As far as the formal context of my internship (Praktikum) is concerned, it WOULD be without cost OR LIABILITY TO you. The EMPLOYMENT Agency (Agentur für Arbeit) WOULD finance this internship.
I LOOK forward BOTH TO A positive response and AN invitation TO WORK in your company.