Leaning to construct sentences with the word retail, outlet mall and etc

Outlet mall is a place where retail stores sell their excess, out of seasons and slow moving inventories/stocks such as plus size clothings and etc.

Outlet malls are usually the place where retail stores will sell their slow moving products at cheaper price.

Can I phrase the above sentences in such ways?
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An outlet centre is a place where retail shops sell their surplus, out-of-season and slow-moving stock, e.g. plus-size clothing, etc.

Outlet malls are usually where retail shops sell their hard-to-sell products at lower prices.